using other forms besides iambic pentameter.

[Brownlie]

ok, well I have a feeling that me just handing you everything isn't helping you as much as figuring it out yourself would be. Yes, that first one was written to be difficult to dissect (although it really is quite simple)

Try this one: http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/showthread.php?tid=9364

it is simple enough and yet metrically interesting enough for our discussion.

What kind of feet are you using? I understand a villanelle needs two alternating refrains and the number of lines are set. Your refrains are not exact I'm not sure if you meant that.

I think you can do this, at least take a guess and i will tell you you're wrong.

Some sort of tetrameter and lines that are eleven syllables