Can I?
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I feel like I don't quite understand this completely, and that the poem could have continued a bit longer to clarify. I sense it has to do with the resistance of growing up perhaps? Maybe it has to do with the speaker's on-going struggle to earn attention from the his/her mother?

Also there should be a comma in place after "Mummy" in the 8th line
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Can I? - by NikkiRHCOG - 06-15-2013, 02:51 AM
RE: Can I? - by AllisonBangert - 06-19-2013, 05:35 AM
RE: Can I? - by billy - 06-20-2013, 03:09 PM
RE: Can I? - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-20-2013, 04:45 PM



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