06-14-2013, 02:23 PM
(06-07-2013, 04:14 AM)nomadpenguin Wrote: I found hope after a cheap meal,
tossed onto our table
like an afterthought.
I told no one of the miracle
hidden away between the folds;
just slipped the scrap of paper
into my pocket,
and savored the taste of
the sweet golden future.
I think sweet golden future is long. Maybe you could shorten it to "sweet future" or "golden future". Otherwise, a short poem of visual imagery. I like it.