Last words

[billy]

I can't imagine
why you would
think
that I do not care

because I
smile
or didn't let the
misery in my heart
show on
my face

doesn't mean
I don't care
see I`m
sick
of people coming up to me
asking what's the issue

when
I don't even
know
what's the issue

but, I guess when
two people go from
two
to
one

it eventually causes
conflict
or
maybe not

Now I`m confused-
wait, I`m actually
annoyed

and now we
have a grudge
planted in our
hearts for no
reason

i like the form and the way it uses some internal rhythm instead of external rhyme.

addy has shown some of the main things that would help.

for me it needs to have a bit more imagery. show us instead of telling us. i am so glad you never once used love or beauty etc. i think your writing is improving. the style certainly is. thanks for the read.