Murder Scene
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(06-11-2013, 02:48 PM)milo Wrote:  
(06-09-2013, 02:42 PM)Leanne Wrote:  Rather than "liken to", the phrase should be "like unto", which is archaic and I'd be tempted to leave it out.

Otherwise, some really good edits, well done Smile
what about :

a great roar, lichen too, an industrial fan, etc

?
I appreciate your feedback. I thought "lichen" is a plant life.
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Murder Scene - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-08-2013, 03:43 PM
RE: Murder Scene - by Leanne - 06-08-2013, 04:12 PM
RE: Murder Scene - by billy - 06-09-2013, 08:08 AM
RE: Murder Scene - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-09-2013, 01:16 PM
RE: Murder Scene - by Leanne - 06-09-2013, 02:42 PM
RE: Murder Scene - by milo - 06-11-2013, 02:48 PM
RE: Murder Scene - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-12-2013, 03:05 PM
RE: Murder Scene - by milo - 06-12-2013, 03:36 PM
RE: Murder Scene - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-12-2013, 03:41 PM
RE: Murder Scene - by milo - 06-12-2013, 05:59 PM
RE: Murder Scene - by billy - 06-10-2013, 07:34 AM



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