Vodka Drunk
#2
this feels like most nights on tour. i hate to be personal with poem posts but
1. needs periods
2. awesome meter
3. great rhythm
4. needs less (shots) BANG
5. good job.
6. buy me a drink?
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
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Vodka Drunk - by AllisonBangert - 06-12-2013, 03:57 AM
RE: Vodka Drunk - by Bunx - 06-12-2013, 06:26 AM
RE: Vodka Drunk - by Brownlie - 06-12-2013, 06:41 AM



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