Murder Scene

Murder Scene

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06-11-2013, 02:48 PM

(06-09-2013, 02:42 PM)Leanne Wrote: Rather than "liken to", the phrase should be "like unto", which is archaic and I'd be tempted to leave it out.

Otherwise, some really good edits, well done

what about :

a great roar, lichen too, an industrial fan, etc

?

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Murder Scene - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-08-2013, 03:43 PM

RE: Murder Scene - by Leanne - 06-08-2013, 04:12 PM

RE: Murder Scene - by billy - 06-09-2013, 08:08 AM

RE: Murder Scene - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-09-2013, 01:16 PM

RE: Murder Scene - by Leanne - 06-09-2013, 02:42 PM

RE: Murder Scene - by milo - 06-11-2013, 02:48 PM

RE: Murder Scene - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-12-2013, 03:05 PM

RE: Murder Scene - by milo - 06-12-2013, 03:36 PM

RE: Murder Scene - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-12-2013, 03:41 PM

RE: Murder Scene - by milo - 06-12-2013, 05:59 PM

RE: Murder Scene - by billy - 06-10-2013, 07:34 AM

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