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Haiku

Volaticus Offline

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06-11-2013, 10:44 AM

Hi,
I love how the last line wraps it up. It's both humorous and serious at the same time.
Thanks for the read Smile

- LB

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Haiku - by Keith - 10-24-2012, 07:45 AM

RE: Haiku - by just mercedes - 10-24-2012, 07:53 AM

RE: Haiku - by billy - 10-24-2012, 08:35 AM

RE: Haiku - by Magpie - 05-28-2013, 12:29 AM

RE: Haiku - by Keith - 06-10-2013, 08:47 AM

RE: Haiku - by Volaticus - 06-11-2013, 10:44 AM

RE: Haiku - by Keith - 06-13-2013, 02:08 AM

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