NEW!!!! amateur poem

[milo]

hey i am amateur poet that threw together this little poem please tell me what you think. I named it her thoughts

Her Thoughts

if she respected her freedom the way
she loved his beatings. Her life would be
filled with gold and riches. But instead
she puts up with him just to make ends
meet.

I think gold AND riches isn't really working. THe line breaks seem random. Also, if she loves the beatings she isn't really 'putting up with them' it doesn't work even facetiously due to the proximity and the lack of any other information about either the narrator or the ellusive "she"