06-09-2013, 02:12 PM
I think some imagery is needed. your writing could be shortened up. You could tell a nice story if you constructively used this as a rough draft.
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Post-Hardcore Emotional Lyricism - by The-Struggle-Within - 06-08-2013, 04:17 AM
RE: Post-Hardcore Emotional Lyricism - by Leanne - 06-08-2013, 06:27 AM
RE: Post-Hardcore Emotional Lyricism - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-09-2013, 02:12 PM
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