in the air

in the air

R.C. KITCHENS Offline

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06-09-2013, 02:08 PM

I like what your trying to do. Its very vague though. It's like you got an emotion and this is how you explain whatever it is. It could read as an emotion or a physical object your explaining. I just dont know, which is intriguing. I dont think you should change it.

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in the air - by anna randy - 06-06-2013, 11:28 AM

RE: in the air - by ccfly - 06-06-2013, 11:34 AM

RE: in the air - by anna randy - 06-06-2013, 11:57 AM

RE: in the air - by Brownlie - 06-06-2013, 12:21 PM

RE: in the air - by philoinlove - 06-06-2013, 02:32 PM

RE: in the air - by newsclippings - 06-06-2013, 04:19 PM

RE: in the air - by canofworms - 06-06-2013, 10:38 PM

RE: in the air - by Leanne - 06-07-2013, 04:56 AM

RE: in the air - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-09-2013, 02:08 PM

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