06-09-2013, 01:16 PM
Leanne I appreciate the feedback. I took your advice and switched a few things. Thanks for the help, if you get a chance read it, I think you might like it better now.
Billy I appreciate the feedback. I did mean for that word to be sprawled. I dont know where the other word come from it didnt work as good as sprawled did so I change it and shortened up the lengthy lines.
I think it might fit better now. I like to leave room for the imagination to play a bit so I left it simple and short.
Thanks again
Billy I appreciate the feedback. I did mean for that word to be sprawled. I dont know where the other word come from it didnt work as good as sprawled did so I change it and shortened up the lengthy lines.
I think it might fit better now. I like to leave room for the imagination to play a bit so I left it simple and short.
Thanks again