06-08-2013, 08:37 PM
"the one unaware of the other"
I think each would sound better here, because one sounds as if you are referring to only... one of them.
What is so significant about the animal's unawareness/obliviousness/unknowingness? It's repeated a lot. Because the speaker understands the sunrise and the world around him, but they do not?
I think each would sound better here, because one sounds as if you are referring to only... one of them.
What is so significant about the animal's unawareness/obliviousness/unknowingness? It's repeated a lot. Because the speaker understands the sunrise and the world around him, but they do not?

