Fortune Cookie
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(06-07-2013, 04:24 AM)UnicornRainbowCake Wrote:  Hi there, I really liked this poem and it's cleverness and then I saw you hadn't posted any critique anywhere else.

It left a sour taste in my mouth, like a mouldy fortune cookie.
Sorry, I'm completely new and I haven't gotten the chance to yet. About to do it right now.
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Fortune Cookie - by nomadpenguin - 06-07-2013, 04:14 AM
RE: Fortune Cookie - by UnicornRainbowCake - 06-07-2013, 04:24 AM
RE: Fortune Cookie - by nomadpenguin - 06-07-2013, 05:13 AM
RE: Fortune Cookie - by shekutarna - 06-07-2013, 07:07 AM
RE: Fortune Cookie - by Ajax - 06-07-2013, 10:50 AM
RE: Fortune Cookie - by Volaticus - 06-08-2013, 07:03 AM
RE: Fortune Cookie - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-14-2013, 02:23 PM



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