06-07-2013, 05:13 AM
(06-07-2013, 04:24 AM)UnicornRainbowCake Wrote: Hi there, I really liked this poem and it's cleverness and then I saw you hadn't posted any critique anywhere else.Sorry, I'm completely new and I haven't gotten the chance to yet. About to do it right now.
It left a sour taste in my mouth, like a mouldy fortune cookie.
