06-07-2013, 04:24 AM
Hi there, I really liked this poem and it's cleverness and then I saw you hadn't posted any critique anywhere else.
It left a sour taste in my mouth, like a mouldy fortune cookie.
It left a sour taste in my mouth, like a mouldy fortune cookie.
- Amy
(You wouldn't be surprised to know my parents did not christen me UnicornRainbowCake.)
(You wouldn't be surprised to know my parents did not christen me UnicornRainbowCake.)