Let's just pretend we never met
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(06-06-2013, 06:37 PM)tectak Wrote:  
(06-06-2013, 03:58 PM)serge gurkski Wrote:  
(06-06-2013, 03:53 PM)tectak Wrote:  Hi serge,
I have not commented on your stuff recently. You seem to be going through a phase.
This is a problem for me. The greatest virtue of your recent (and not so recentSmile) efforts is also the greatest failing...you have started to write with complete self indulgency. This is so evident that even the "form" of this piece is screaming out "leave me alone"! In other words, because you are writing veracity verse, it is what it is and cannot be critiqued on any of the platforms which we stand on.
I will, therefore, just say this. You could put it better....but no critic could.
Best,
tectak
would you prefer me to leave?
No. I would prefer you to stay...but who listens to my opinionHysterical

Indeed,

but:

"A father who whipped his son for swearing and swore at him while he whipped him, did more harm by his example than good by his correction."
Thomas Fuller, author and divine


Tom, um ..

Le mie scusi, ma:

Other ladies must hopefully-comfortably
cum first.
I am positive you'll understand.

And on that
( -pleased-to- ) please,
consider
it
may
be next
time I
will better fit
your bill.

serge (relatively (un-) im

-pressed)- presto
impressionato
2 pleas.

Cheers
and:

May you have a good time cuming.


Gratiam tibi,

arbiter elegantiarum aut
elegantiae.

To You, then,
Petronio!

Tu est arbiter elegentiarum saeculi saeculorumm . whastever whathefuck. My you prosper, good luck and poof!


Messages In This Thread
RE: Let's just pretend we never met - by tectak - 06-06-2013, 03:53 PM
RE: Let's just pretend we never met - by tectak - 06-06-2013, 06:37 PM
RE: Let's just pretend we never met - by serge gurkski - 06-06-2013, 06:52 PM



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