I haven't written anything for about 10 years. What do you think?

I haven't written anything for about 10 years. What do you think?

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06-06-2013, 06:58 AM

I prefer version 1 to 2.
I agree with others, in the last 3 lines you kinda lose the melody or something, I don't know, in my opinion they just don't belong here, or they do but definitely in different form.
I like the poem entirely
Considering u haven't written anything in 10 years it's awesome Smile

Hope to see more from u Smile

Yep, I'm awesome at making signatures too, be jealous :p
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I haven't written anything for about 10 years. What do you think? - by canofworms - 06-05-2013, 06:15 PM

RE: I haven't written anything for about 10 years. What do you think? - by UnicornRainbowCake - 06-06-2013, 12:06 AM

RE: I haven't written anything for about 10 years. What do you think? - by canofworms - 06-06-2013, 02:15 AM

RE: I haven't written anything for about 10 years. What do you think? - by UnicornRainbowCake - 06-06-2013, 03:37 AM

RE: I haven't written anything for about 10 years. What do you think? - by Sonata - 06-06-2013, 06:58 AM

RE: I haven't written anything for about 10 years. What do you think? - by canofworms - 06-06-2013, 07:16 AM

RE: I haven't written anything for about 10 years. What do you think? - by billy - 06-06-2013, 07:27 AM

RE: I haven't written anything for about 10 years. What do you think? - by canofworms - 06-06-2013, 10:41 PM

RE: I haven't written anything for about 10 years. What do you think? - by UnicornRainbowCake - 06-07-2013, 04:31 AM

RE: I haven't written anything for about 10 years. What do you think? - by canofworms - 06-07-2013, 05:09 AM

RE: I haven't written anything for about 10 years. What do you think? - by canofworms - 02-08-2017, 11:54 AM

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