The Eclipse of West Bumblefuck
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(06-05-2013, 10:56 AM)James Wrote:  Thanks for letting me know, I hope I made it a bit easier on the read now.
It's definitely better with the punctuation, but I still think it's a bit off. If you want, I can make some suggestions.
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The Eclipse of West Bumblefuck - by James - 06-05-2013, 07:58 AM
RE: The Eclipse of West Bumblefuck - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 10:27 AM
RE: The Eclipse of West Bumblefuck - by James - 06-05-2013, 10:56 AM
RE: The Eclipse of West Bumblefuck - by Volaticus - 06-05-2013, 11:47 AM
RE: The Eclipse of West Bumblefuck - by James - 06-06-2013, 06:43 AM
RE: The Eclipse of West Bumblefuck - by Volaticus - 06-06-2013, 07:33 AM



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