06-05-2013, 10:27 AM
Hi James,
I think this poem would read much easier, if you didn't capitalize every line, and if you added some periods and commas. I stumbled over the lines on my read-through, distracting me from what is said.
Thanks for the read.
- LB
I think this poem would read much easier, if you didn't capitalize every line, and if you added some periods and commas. I stumbled over the lines on my read-through, distracting me from what is said.
Thanks for the read.
- LB