Feral Cat

[Volaticus]

I feel eyes piercing glass is vague... Sticking with descriptions of the cat may work better than describing actions of the narrator. I don't know anything about haiku though...

Thank you for commenting, but I have to disagree. For me it is everything but vague, the image of a matted cat with a begging stare, looking at you from the cold outside.
The actions of the narrator is only in the last line, which is needed, since my point with the poem was compassion.

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I'm a feral animal...

technically.

That's also how I see myself. A lot.