06-01-2013, 08:21 AM
Hi,
I love this poem/story; the way you play with the different thoughts throughout and the way you play with the underage theme. It awoke some strong emotions in me. By the way, I loved the Human Centipede reference. I think that was clever.
-LB
I love this poem/story; the way you play with the different thoughts throughout and the way you play with the underage theme. It awoke some strong emotions in me. By the way, I loved the Human Centipede reference. I think that was clever.
-LB

