Endjambent?

[billy]

The bottom of a skillet tastes the fire,
men scrape and stir, push shoulders into meaty
ochre stew. "You there! Stop six-blockin' and hand
some fresh irons and plates!" The hunt for
wren eggs and butterscotch begins. Bless the French,
toast the Italians, good eats for us rapscallions.


every line is enjambed to create a different word that is supposed to 'link' concepts - firemen, mediocre, handsome, foreign, French toast. The first does the same thing, but better

now i'm getting somewhere; rhyme they say is best unnoticed. i never noticed the enjambment of the first line. i did with meaty in the next. i also never noticed it in the penultimate linen. i did however use a different pause than if they were firemen/handsome/french toast etc.

thanks for the follow up