05-30-2013, 03:46 PM
Hi Brownlie,
also read this through and thought it was a nicely descriptive piece of prose that (for me) brought back plenty of shared memories. I thought it was good, but was not sure what it was you wanted from the crit; but I see the laird of the serious has spoken and once the thumb has been raised or lowered no other comment is required, except those of humble confessions of wrongness, regret and apology. (which I see you have also attended to - so all is right with the world and it is spinning so much better this morning
).
also read this through and thought it was a nicely descriptive piece of prose that (for me) brought back plenty of shared memories. I thought it was good, but was not sure what it was you wanted from the crit; but I see the laird of the serious has spoken and once the thumb has been raised or lowered no other comment is required, except those of humble confessions of wrongness, regret and apology. (which I see you have also attended to - so all is right with the world and it is spinning so much better this morning
).