05-30-2013, 03:22 PM
Hi Brownlie,
This is an excellent piece of prose, with some really good details in it.
Do you want to make it more poetic? I nearly asked why it was called rats there, but thank God I manage to get it just in time.
I really do think that it stands up as a very well executed prose piece, but then it comes down to the age old argument of what is prose and what is poetry?
Was it a rhetorical question? it's quite early in the morning for me to be in serious critique.
I have to run.
This is an excellent piece of prose, with some really good details in it.
Do you want to make it more poetic? I nearly asked why it was called rats there, but thank God I manage to get it just in time.
I really do think that it stands up as a very well executed prose piece, but then it comes down to the age old argument of what is prose and what is poetry?
Was it a rhetorical question? it's quite early in the morning for me to be in serious critique.
I have to run.
wae aye man ye radgie