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05-26-2013, 12:05 PM
(05-26-2013, 11:28 AM)untitled Wrote:  Whisper
Hush thoughts
Woolen Eyes
Think not, young mind

Dissonance
Sparks synapse
Iron lungs
Fear not, brave heart

Sweat
Wooden hands
Weakened earth
Rest not, cold touch

Whimper
Curved paths
Chalked form
Sleep now, old bones
Abit terse I am left confused. I think you should expand to make your thoughts more clear. Just my opinion
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untitled - by untitled - 05-26-2013, 11:28 AM
RE: untitled - by Leanne - 05-27-2013, 04:47 AM
RE: untitled - by rowens - 05-27-2013, 04:47 AM
RE: untitled - by untitled - 05-27-2013, 04:50 AM
RE: untitled - by rowens - 05-27-2013, 04:56 AM
RE: untitled - by untitled - 05-27-2013, 04:58 AM
RE: untitled - by rowens - 05-27-2013, 05:02 AM
RE: untitled - by cidermaid - 05-27-2013, 05:41 AM
RE: untitled - by untitled - 05-27-2013, 06:16 AM
RE: untitled - by rayheinrich - 05-31-2013, 06:43 PM
RE: untitled - by untitled - 05-27-2013, 08:12 AM
RE: untitled - by Leendzorro - 05-27-2013, 09:08 AM
RE: untitled - by Ryan_w_r - 05-27-2013, 10:05 AM
RE: First Poem - by Brownlie - 05-26-2013, 12:05 PM
RE: First Poem - by untitled - 05-26-2013, 12:23 PM
RE: First Poem - by milo - 05-26-2013, 12:40 PM
RE: First Poem - by untitled - 05-26-2013, 12:46 PM
RE: First Poem - by milo - 05-26-2013, 01:07 PM
RE: First Poem - by untitled - 05-26-2013, 01:14 PM
RE: First Poem - by milo - 05-26-2013, 01:31 PM
RE: First Poem - by untitled - 05-26-2013, 01:33 PM
RE: First Poem - by milo - 05-26-2013, 02:01 PM
RE: First Poem - by untitled - 05-26-2013, 02:03 PM
RE: First Poem - by milo - 05-26-2013, 02:08 PM
RE: First Poem - by untitled - 05-26-2013, 02:14 PM
RE: First Poem - by milo - 05-26-2013, 02:17 PM
RE: First Poem - by untitled - 05-26-2013, 02:25 PM
RE: First Poem - by milo - 05-26-2013, 02:27 PM
RE: First Poem - by untitled - 05-26-2013, 02:29 PM
RE: First Poem - by milo - 05-26-2013, 02:44 PM
RE: First Poem - by untitled - 05-26-2013, 02:46 PM
RE: First Poem - by milo - 05-26-2013, 02:51 PM
RE: First Poem - by untitled - 05-26-2013, 02:59 PM
RE: Untitled - by rowens - 05-27-2013, 03:46 AM
RE: Untitled - by untitled - 05-27-2013, 03:54 AM
RE: Untitled - by rowens - 05-27-2013, 03:58 AM
RE: Untitled - by untitled - 05-27-2013, 04:01 AM
RE: untitled - by rowens - 05-27-2013, 04:08 AM
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RE: untitled - by rowens - 05-27-2013, 04:13 AM
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RE: untitled - by rowens - 05-27-2013, 04:17 AM
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RE: untitled - by rowens - 05-27-2013, 04:32 AM
RE: untitled - by untitled - 05-27-2013, 04:36 AM



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