Jess Land Sum
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(05-25-2013, 09:08 AM)billy Wrote:  yes james. this is my point, you know and understand everything you wrote. we well me, struggled to, mainly because i'm not you and i never had the code to open the poem up. while explanations after the read may help. the poem still causes problems when read, for all the reasons mentioned.
I understand Billy, I was actually thinking of now on making my poems, well less in need of a code to open them up. I think I may have went a bit overboard there, with making people struggle, which I'll try to now stay away from. This really opened my eyes, I guess this repays me the "Geez" thing. Smile

P.S.- Its already on mild critique, Its still on the upper part of the middle on the first page, I believe
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Jess Land Sum - by James - 05-23-2013, 05:29 AM
RE: Jess Land Sum - by Magpie - 05-23-2013, 09:34 AM
RE: Jess Land Sum - by James - 05-23-2013, 01:00 PM
RE: Jess Land Sum - by rowens - 05-26-2013, 01:55 AM
RE: Jess Land Sum - by James - 05-28-2013, 04:32 AM
Jess Land Sum - by James - 05-23-2013, 01:26 PM
RE: Jess Land Sum - by tectak - 05-23-2013, 03:33 PM
RE: Jess Land Sum - by James - 05-24-2013, 05:19 AM
RE: Jess Land Sum - by tectak - 05-25-2013, 05:51 AM
RE: Jess Land Sum - by James - 05-25-2013, 07:59 AM
RE: Jess Land Sum - by tectak - 05-27-2013, 10:48 PM
RE: Jess Land Sum - by billy - 05-25-2013, 08:01 AM
RE: Jess Land Sum - by James - 05-25-2013, 08:08 AM
RE: Jess Land Sum - by billy - 05-25-2013, 08:12 AM
RE: Jess Land Sum - by James - 05-25-2013, 08:29 AM
RE: Jess Land Sum - by billy - 05-25-2013, 09:08 AM
RE: Jess Land Sum - by James - 05-25-2013, 09:28 AM
RE: Jess Land Sum - by newsclippings - 05-25-2013, 06:26 PM



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