Composed Upon Seat E11, May 23, 2013

Composed Upon Seat E11, May 23, 2013

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05-24-2013, 09:25 PM

I think the first three stanzas stand on their own, as the last one comes off as arrogant.

Otherwise this is one damn good poem in my opinion, as I can relate. I would call your poem complete as is and move on to your next one. Its perfect.

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Composed Upon Seat E11, May 23, 2013 - by UnicornRainbowCake - 05-24-2013, 05:56 AM

RE: Composed Upon Seat E11, May 23, 2013 - by James - 05-24-2013, 07:18 AM

RE: Composed Upon Seat E11, May 23, 2013 - by milo - 05-24-2013, 07:51 AM

RE: Composed Upon Seat E11, May 23, 2013 - by UnicornRainbowCake - 05-24-2013, 03:21 PM

RE: Composed Upon Seat E11, May 23, 2013 - by milo - 05-24-2013, 04:46 PM

RE: Composed Upon Seat E11, May 23, 2013 - by billy - 05-24-2013, 05:22 PM

RE: Composed Upon Seat E11, May 23, 2013 - by YaMarVa - 05-24-2013, 09:25 PM

RE: Composed Upon Seat E11, May 23, 2013 - by UnicornRainbowCake - 05-24-2013, 11:49 PM

RE: Composed Upon Seat E11, May 23, 2013 - by Bunx - 05-24-2013, 10:19 PM

RE: Composed Upon Seat E11, May 23, 2013 - by Ryan_w_r - 05-25-2013, 12:29 AM

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