05-24-2013, 09:07 AM
(05-23-2013, 10:10 PM)Bunx Wrote: yo matt! i like this poem! it reminds me of those nights at dead hipster dance party and the countless after show stay up intill you driving to the next city. this poem is alot of fun. I like the juxtaposition between the retreating of nature and the spirit of adventure. thanks for the poemOh! Now I feel silly, no I dif't get that at all. Maybe just a little tweaking here and there to get that idea across- some bigger clues for those of us who aren't so quick!

