She Doesn't Work Here Anymore
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the deep south.. i wish i was going on tour so i could meet you in noure 'liens. but i am not because of what i have. regaurdless the south scares boys like me up into the mountains. even if we don't get scared. or should be.

anyways rowens

your poem is great!

the mythic rhythm is something i would find a southern gentleman to write, in regards to a sweetie.
it puts me to sleep with it warm tone.

but

its modern connotations and denotations make it (i feel) quite repeatable and utterly relatable.
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She Doesn't Work Here Anymore - by rowens - 05-24-2013, 12:49 AM
RE: She Doesn't Work Here Anymore - by cidermaid - 05-24-2013, 03:02 AM
RE: She Doesn't Work Here Anymore - by rowens - 05-24-2013, 05:20 AM
RE: She Doesn't Work Here Anymore - by Bunx - 05-24-2013, 07:21 AM
RE: She Doesn't Work Here Anymore - by James - 05-24-2013, 07:38 AM
RE: She Doesn't Work Here Anymore - by rowens - 05-24-2013, 09:43 AM
RE: She Doesn't Work Here Anymore - by billy - 05-24-2013, 10:02 AM
RE: She Doesn't Work Here Anymore - by rowens - 05-24-2013, 10:12 AM
RE: She Doesn't Work Here Anymore - by Brownlie - 05-24-2013, 10:54 AM
RE: She Doesn't Work Here Anymore - by rowens - 05-24-2013, 11:29 PM



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