05-24-2013, 06:41 AM
(05-24-2013, 05:46 AM)rowens Wrote: This poem has end rhymes, and it has the shape of verse. There isn't a steady meter, but there almost is. That's not bad in and of itself. You can do things that way. But rhymes usually work better with a structured rhythm. There's a kind of rhythm here.Thanks, I will pick it up as well... That is if I can find them.
Your last reply to me is in the form of prose. Some people write prose poems; and some people write free verse, or whatever people call it. There are limitless ways you can do things. As long as you somehow get that poetic magic to come through.
And American Gods is a pretty good book. I always liked The Sandman by the same person.

