Blind love
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(05-24-2013, 05:07 AM)rowens Wrote:  It doesn't really seem like prose. Do you want the spaces between the lines?
I "write" all my pomes on my iPhone notepad and the spaces help me break it up so my eyes don't float around the on the little screen. So no I should edit is and remove the spaces.. As far as this and my other poem "the play" goes multiple members have told me that they are more prose than poems.. I didn't even know what a prose was until today so I just went with what I was being told... And now your comment is adding to my confusion.. Haha thanks for always wanting to help out. I really do appreciate it.
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Blind love - by Ryan_w_r - 05-23-2013, 02:17 PM
RE: Blind love - by Bunx - 05-23-2013, 10:24 PM
RE: Blind love - by Ryan_w_r - 05-23-2013, 10:40 PM
RE: Blind love - by Bunx - 05-23-2013, 11:03 PM
RE: Blind love - by Ryan_w_r - 05-23-2013, 11:13 PM
RE: Blind love - by Bunx - 05-24-2013, 12:09 AM
RE: Blind love - by Ryan_w_r - 05-24-2013, 12:29 AM
RE: Blind love - by Todd - 05-24-2013, 04:31 AM
RE: Blind love - by rowens - 05-24-2013, 05:07 AM
RE: Blind love - by Ryan_w_r - 05-24-2013, 05:28 AM
RE: Blind love - by rowens - 05-24-2013, 05:46 AM
RE: Blind love - by Ryan_w_r - 05-24-2013, 06:41 AM
RE: Blind love - by rowens - 05-24-2013, 06:46 AM



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