05-23-2013, 10:40 PM
(05-23-2013, 10:24 PM)Bunx Wrote: awww!! this is a glorious poem! being from missoula (the rape capital of the united states rofl)Thanks so much!! I like my poems to to be more like a short story that paint an interesting picture. Im really glad you can appreciate them!! Seems like some people don't really like the rhyming in my writing. To me making it rhyme is a fun part of the challenge.
this hits home hard. i think your speaking from the view point of some kind of mental doctor who has a remedy for immortality. i love these short stories/pose you write. it make my morning hmmm a delight?

