05-22-2013, 11:24 PM
add some punctuation anything really. i find my eyes going back and forth up and down, not sure how i should speak this poem outloud. anyways like the imagery and symbolism. i feel like you are singing/rapping this poem, which could make it more confusing. anyways i like the symbolism of the lamppost (words line 1) where is only comes on in the night, and turns off during the day.
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
--mark twain
Bunx

