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Retro-Futuristic
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05-22-2013, 06:22 AM
(05-22-2013, 06:10 AM)rowens Wrote: It's hard to say with something like this one. First you could see if anything feels excessive to you, and take it out. Leave the rest more concentrated.Do you think this should rhyme? I'm not sure if I'd like it to. I am taking out unnecessary words and concentrating it like you suggested. Should I post revisions in this thread?
I'm not a poetry expert, but I enjoy poetry!
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Retro-Futuristic - by seth.meyers - 05-21-2013, 11:22 PM
RE: Retro-Futuristic - by rowens - 05-22-2013, 02:59 AM
RE: Retro-Futuristic - by seth.meyers - 05-22-2013, 05:50 AM
RE: Retro-Futuristic - by rowens - 05-22-2013, 06:10 AM
RE: Retro-Futuristic - by seth.meyers - 05-22-2013, 06:22 AM
RE: Retro-Futuristic - by rowens - 05-22-2013, 06:24 AM
RE: Retro-Futuristic - by UnicornRainbowCake - 05-22-2013, 06:38 AM
RE: Retro-Futuristic - by seth.meyers - 05-22-2013, 07:40 AM
RE: Retro-Futuristic - by rowens - 05-22-2013, 08:40 AM
RE: Retro-Futuristic - by seth.meyers - 05-22-2013, 08:51 AM
RE: Retro-Futuristic - by billy - 05-22-2013, 10:37 AM
RE: Retro-Futuristic - by rowens - 05-23-2013, 03:56 AM
RE: Retro-Futuristic - by seth.meyers - 05-23-2013, 05:29 AM
RE: Retro-Futuristic - by James - 05-24-2013, 07:05 AM
RE: Retro-Futuristic - by seth.meyers - 05-25-2013, 02:01 AM
RE: Retro-Futuristic - by seth.meyers - 05-27-2013, 10:49 AM
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