Tangled Trees

[Bunx]

Tangled Trees

I remember when you used to smile.
Blue skies, fluffy clouds and that spark in your eyes.
Sunlight and happiness and not a care in the world.
Laughing and dancing through a beautiful life.


I remember when you used to surprise.
Bustling through life like we had no time.
Cities and buildings, flashes of light.
Running and leaping around the world.


Used to

Used to, used to, used to.

I remember when you used to make me cry.
I definitely remember that spark in your eyes.
Dark clouds and thunder and blood on the trees.
Sadness and regret and pitiful pleads.

I remember.

the thematic change after the line "Used to, Used to, used to."
seems to be a shift in tonality. when i read it, it got more monotone.
i hope my advice can help you highlight this tonality change to a greater extent.