05-17-2013, 04:32 AM
Hi,
Thank you so much for the replies! I wanted the start of it to sound simple and corny-a kind of typical romance, light and cliched. But I think I need to put more passion into the beginning to make readers feel the story. I think there is a certain tone that it has to be read in, and it's hard to do that when the start is so light and blah blah, you automatically read it in that tone. I will definitely have to work on the beginning of it as it's not working. Thank you so much
Thank you so much for the replies! I wanted the start of it to sound simple and corny-a kind of typical romance, light and cliched. But I think I need to put more passion into the beginning to make readers feel the story. I think there is a certain tone that it has to be read in, and it's hard to do that when the start is so light and blah blah, you automatically read it in that tone. I will definitely have to work on the beginning of it as it's not working. Thank you so much