05-16-2013, 08:38 AM
(05-15-2013, 06:16 AM)ambrosial revelation Wrote:Hi AR,Balmy spring evening,
illuminated street light,
gossamer glowing.
Towering pylon,
electricity above,
buzzing bees below.
Vivid red petals...
unsheltered, weather beaten
Wallflower swaying.
I think you've done an excellent job with these, and they fit well together as a whole piece. I didn't know what 'gossamer' was, before I looked it up. It's a really beautiful picture you have there, and it also taught me a new, very usable word, so thanks.
The second has that natural/human-made contrast that I also liked in some of your other pieces. The last one, I'm sorry I didn't like so much. For me, the picture doesn't stand as strong in my head, as it did when I read the other two.Best,
-LB