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Bingo Night (Language)
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05-16-2013, 08:18 AM
The suggested edits have tidied this up nicely, very fun piece, I like the implied leaving everyone back at home in the last stanza. To be PC on the Archers you could swap "and take it from me" for "and one thing is sure". Hope this helps. TOMH
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Bingo Night (Language) - by UnicornRainbowCake - 04-18-2013, 07:26 AM
RE: Bingo Night (Language) - by philoinlove - 04-18-2013, 09:38 AM
RE: Bingo Night (Language) - by billy - 04-18-2013, 12:30 PM
RE: Bingo Night (Language) - by Smiffy - 04-19-2013, 06:30 AM
RE: Bingo Night (Language) - by UnicornRainbowCake - 04-26-2013, 06:23 AM
RE: Bingo Night (Language) - by heslopian - 04-21-2013, 02:11 PM
RE: Bingo Night (Language) - by Catcherin - 05-15-2013, 05:53 AM
RE: Bingo Night (Language) - by C.M.C. - 05-15-2013, 08:03 AM
RE: Bingo Night (Language) - by Keith - 05-16-2013, 08:18 AM
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