Hopscotch
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Hi,
I must say I enjoyed the ending very much. But as others has said, I too couldn't fully find out the meaning. I'm not sure what in the first two stanzas, connects to the happenings in the third's last two lines. But that might just be me. A cute little poem. Thanks for the read.
-LB
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Messages In This Thread
Hopscotch - by qwerty_H - 05-14-2013, 09:04 PM
RE: Hopscotch - by Teddy Savet - 05-15-2013, 02:30 AM
RE: Hopscotch - by Catcherin - 05-15-2013, 04:59 AM
RE: Hopscotch - by qwerty_H - 05-15-2013, 08:29 PM
RE: Hopscotch - by Volaticus - 05-16-2013, 07:58 AM
RE: Hopscotch - by tadaki - 05-18-2013, 08:46 PM
RE: Hopscotch - by qwerty_H - 05-19-2013, 04:19 AM
RE: Hopscotch - by billy - 05-19-2013, 08:53 AM
RE: Hopscotch - by qwerty_H - 05-20-2013, 06:09 PM



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