Tangled Trees

Tangled Trees

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05-16-2013, 07:54 AM

Hey. I definitely feel the emotion of this piece!! The ending is very nice. I thought some of the earlier lines were a bit corny though. Blue skies, fluffy clouds, sparks in your eyes, stuff like that. Good luck with it!

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-H

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Tangled Trees - by Lollipop - 05-15-2013, 08:46 AM

RE: Tangled Trees - by Brownlie - 05-16-2013, 12:01 AM

RE: Tangled Trees - by Volaticus - 05-16-2013, 12:24 AM

RE: Tangled Trees - by rowens - 05-16-2013, 04:25 AM

RE: Tangled Trees - by qwerty_H - 05-16-2013, 07:54 AM

RE: Tangled Trees - by Lollipop - 05-17-2013, 04:32 AM

RE: Tangled Trees - by tadaki - 05-18-2013, 08:32 PM

RE: Tangled Trees - by GDavid - 05-19-2013, 09:30 AM

RE: Tangled Trees - by Bunx - 05-22-2013, 02:37 AM

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