Tangled Trees

[Brownlie]

Tangled Trees

I remember when you used to smile.
Blue skies, fluffy clouds and that spark in your eyes.
Sunlight and happiness and not a care in the world.--- happiness is vague
Laughing and dancing through a beautiful life.--- Beautiful life describe in more detail


I remember when you used to surprise.
Bustling through life like we had no time.
Cities and buildings, flashes of light.
Running and leaping around the world.


Used to

Used to, used to, used to.

I remember when you used to make me cry.-- this emotion can be expanded on
I definitely remember that spark in your eyes.
Dark clouds and thunder and blood on the trees.- This is my favorite line
Sadness and regret and pitiful pleads.

I remember.

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