Sunk

[Brownlie]

I have a compass, broken and cracked
yours had a fracture, from front end to back

We set off sail
one soul aboard
I lifted anchor and we dragged and we soured

But our mast would but buckle, forced from this sea
those eyes still watered, body kept from me

And while I've been tied around our shipwreck in sea
you find your lighthouse, put there by me

I've got this compass all broken and cracked
Now taking in water, from front end to back

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we dragged and we soared**

Your consistent with your metaphor I would consider getting rid of words like soul. Don't know hopefully you get some better comments.