05-15-2013, 11:44 PM
It's a really great idea, I like how you've fitted in the semantic field without it being unnatural. I agree with the 'hidden to so many' - perhaps you could talk about how everybody sees the stars, but only some understand the constellations and patterns? It might have been what you were aiming for.
- Amy
(You wouldn't be surprised to know my parents did not christen me UnicornRainbowCake.)
(You wouldn't be surprised to know my parents did not christen me UnicornRainbowCake.)