The night photographer
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I enjoyed this a lot, the last stanza in particular is very well composed. The only lines that I'm not taken with are; "What restless ghosts,
awaken you to secret skies?". Just feels a bit redundant. Great work, look forward to reading more from you Smile
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The night photographer - by Tommy - 05-15-2013, 01:56 PM
RE: The night photographer - by billy - 05-15-2013, 02:36 PM
RE: The night photographer - by Tommy - 05-15-2013, 02:56 PM
RE: The night photographer - by billy - 05-15-2013, 03:02 PM
RE: The night photographer - by Catcherin - 05-15-2013, 05:57 PM
RE: The night photographer - by Tommy - 05-16-2013, 10:10 AM
RE: The night photographer - by poeticdancer - 05-17-2013, 11:05 AM
RE: The night photographer - by Tommy - 05-18-2013, 09:24 AM



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