05-15-2013, 05:57 PM
I enjoyed this a lot, the last stanza in particular is very well composed. The only lines that I'm not taken with are; "What restless ghosts,
awaken you to secret skies?". Just feels a bit redundant. Great work, look forward to reading more from you
awaken you to secret skies?". Just feels a bit redundant. Great work, look forward to reading more from you

