(1st edit)14th May Haiku
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Balmy spring evening,
illuminated street light,
gossamer glowing.

Above busy bees
electricity surges
through buzzing pylon

Constructing it's nest
Blackbird begins third attempt
on top of porch light


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Balmy spring evening,
illuminated street light,
gossamer glowing.

Towering pylon,
electricity above,
buzzing bees below.

Vivid red petals...
unsheltered, weather beaten
Wallflower swaying.
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(1st edit)14th May Haiku - by Magpie - 05-15-2013, 06:16 AM
RE: 14th May Haiku - by cidermaid - 05-15-2013, 03:08 PM
RE: 14th May Haiku - by billy - 05-15-2013, 03:22 PM
RE: 14th May Haiku - by Volaticus - 05-16-2013, 08:38 AM
RE: 14th May Haiku - by Magpie - 05-18-2013, 09:03 AM
RE: (1st edit)14th May Haiku - by Magpie - 05-18-2013, 01:52 PM



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