Despite Taking The Road Less Traveled Revised
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I would agree with everything that has been said here but would also add that the second stanza sounds a little bit clumsy. Personally the repetition of "we" makes it a little abrasive for me. Having said that I really like the 3rd stanza and the lines "Glean behind the reapers, son, And work for me till work is done" are fantastic. Smile
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Despite Taking The Road Less Traveled Revised - by thatguyfromacrossthestreet - 05-14-2013, 11:27 AM
RE: Despite Taking The Road Less Traveled Revised - by Catcherin - 05-15-2013, 06:01 AM



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