05-15-2013, 06:01 AM
I would agree with everything that has been said here but would also add that the second stanza sounds a little bit clumsy. Personally the repetition of "we" makes it a little abrasive for me. Having said that I really like the 3rd stanza and the lines "Glean behind the reapers, son, And work for me till work is done" are fantastic.

