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05-15-2013, 05:18 AM

If your reason for writing the poem was to show a deep depression with out much happening , you succeeded. If there was more I missed it, sorry. Maybe rewrite seeking to explain the why would make it more interesting.

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Today is the day - by albino-rino-5000 - 05-12-2013, 12:49 AM

RE: Today is the day - by KICKBACK - 05-12-2013, 04:17 AM

RE: Today is the day - by Heartafire - 05-12-2013, 04:30 AM

RE: Today is the day - by Volaticus - 05-12-2013, 08:14 AM

RE: Today is the day - by qwerty_H - 05-13-2013, 06:09 AM

RE: Today is the day - by Sam33lynn - 05-14-2013, 12:50 PM

RE: Today is the day - by GDavid - 05-15-2013, 05:18 AM

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