05-15-2013, 05:02 AM
For me, this is the whole poem:
Despite following the road less traveled
It quickly came to me:
That following a path not fully unraveled
Is still following,
And it's all the same to me.
Reading it by itself, I really enjoyed the light wit, humour, and general tone of it. It's almost slightly surreal I think.
If I were you, I would take this and work from it. It is the best part for me. Use the ideas in the whole of the poem and write them in the same effortless sounding tone like this.
Despite following the road less traveled
It quickly came to me:
That following a path not fully unraveled
Is still following,
And it's all the same to me.
Reading it by itself, I really enjoyed the light wit, humour, and general tone of it. It's almost slightly surreal I think.
If I were you, I would take this and work from it. It is the best part for me. Use the ideas in the whole of the poem and write them in the same effortless sounding tone like this.
- Amy
(You wouldn't be surprised to know my parents did not christen me UnicornRainbowCake.)
(You wouldn't be surprised to know my parents did not christen me UnicornRainbowCake.)

