05-14-2013, 12:50 PM
I like the theme of this poem and I enjoyed reading it. Just a few more details would enhance it. Why doesn't he like his life. The last line is powerful
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Today is the day - by albino-rino-5000 - 05-12-2013, 12:49 AM
RE: Today is the day - by KICKBACK - 05-12-2013, 04:17 AM
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RE: Today is the day - by Sam33lynn - 05-14-2013, 12:50 PM
RE: Today is the day - by GDavid - 05-15-2013, 05:18 AM
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