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Loves Forgotten Fight
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05-14-2013, 08:40 AM
I think you use some very interesting words and phrases in this poem. I like the clear contrast between the stanzas, and still there's a cohesiveness in the words and breaks, that ties the stanzas well together. I'm sorry for not being able to give any constructive crit, I just wanted to say that I enjoyed the read. Thanks
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Loves Forgotten Fight - by Keith - 05-13-2013, 06:32 AM
RE: Loves Forgotten Fight - by Volaticus - 05-14-2013, 08:40 AM
RE: Loves Forgotten Fight - by Keith - 05-16-2013, 09:01 AM
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